Not his best work

Honestly I know that my opinion is very unpopular with this being a four star app and all so here me out or just keep scrolling. I havent finished this story and I dont really want to. I was looking for a story about time travel and I didnt get that. I got a bunch of bits and pieces of memories that you play around with to try to get this guys wife to not die by using time travel. I dont feel that bonded to any of the characters because you dont really feel like you spend that much time with them. I am still kind of confused in the story line. I just over all dont like this story execution and can see why it was only a dollar. I am not trying to hate on the author I am just offering my constructive criticism :)

{~+j@me5+~} about Paradox Factor